【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
, c& `% s8 I! n: O# A1 M8 Vxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

  m2 P7 L/ e$ l" c; z& n再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

% N8 N! J: L8 J/ O$ nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% j' `' o6 a. y" A2 N$ ]夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

- N  y- W  ^# Q6 p/ v) Y( aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! i3 y* f0 P# }5 D) |凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, P$ M0 [# }- X5 G# g" Y. F月光闪烁 在我眼中
' b& U7 B' t, N& p: a- H9 ^( CThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ i' B, P8 L+ F8 J' n: K% b一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
' K5 F6 d9 c2 i! O( e/ B" C" r; M3 ^4 sSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
  h. D7 i( A7 K. t& a  B3 G. ?It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
, r  ?6 U7 ?) R$ PYou needn’t fear anything
8 E) ~5 U4 U( T0 i9 K- @怕这怕那 又是何苦
2 `0 x/ q2 }1 c4 Y4 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" ?+ M( I0 ^; S5 }8 _# H& v3 ]我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
+ S3 H5 F. |0 n- [; CEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
- S7 D" N" X0 vI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 H: w* y0 D0 _& t8 f爱你爱你 全心全意
/ z% _2 _9 e2 A2 T5 ^Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
( ]: m% V( h  b2 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
, c3 Z$ t0 |/ J: r' z# P我真想看透你的心
+ j) A9 p  _2 |$ d  i' RI invite you to rip it out
1 \7 e! ]2 ^- L# S6 @/ V7 j( R( S你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; T+ ~4 E# q2 R5 H若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
; W  u' M9 J* f  h( x- Y+ S8 _可我依然满心忧虑
/ C3 n3 C- R. D# ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 G! c' h* w5 V' A- n+ L. L9 Y8 T你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
$ D' ]) g0 C$ m% S# q3 V; @- KI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
* z& ?0 X) T; V$ r3 ~/ KWith such a tongue as yours,
! q/ _  {. J; l你这张嘴 真真厉害
4 [" N6 s! I2 |: W3 q$ ^# }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
5 K) o4 e% Y2 Q/ l8 \- _Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 u/ @& P9 p' m从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 r$ u5 s2 S  \, i* j6 |爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
- ~& \/ @' t% `从此别无他意
: t# L4 ?) z* A  HWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 X* b/ p8 B) J% p$ T奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
9 E& h+ X4 h; |/ D+ |! Z. z8 EI would probably know how you feel
, Z9 y1 }% [  q8 p3 i9 g( o% U2 p或能知你心意
+ R! Y' u* n. g* d6 M6 I' z5 q, WLove… just the word love
3 B) }1 g; Z" ]爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 z- G3 _8 A* U( v; L, O为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
  Z( j8 O; I  N7 }我多想向你表白
1 g! z3 r3 v8 UBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
+ U8 j9 P  V% \$ ?! h- H$ s  U) `7 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# y& y7 h3 E# j# s  \1 t# A只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
- C& w# _- N/ FIf today isn’t too late,
- K* u$ _$ t- x8 I假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 f8 ]' a: o! `3 P' A) J5 V今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ `' {9 S5 |9 }, {  Y  O6 y9 ^不愿这份爱 逝如流水
/ _) v6 I' c0 W( _  H( ]& ~4 _Can I entrust it to you?
0 g4 f6 ~0 F7 _& f9 _3 d2 c8 q5 K可否将它 托付于你?
+ R+ A9 U7 G8 P2 J- a/ A% REntrust my love within your heart
9 i. m+ Z% o! @+ W0 e从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
+ J7 e) Q6 v) o, b; Q; K' V( ^爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
( C( R% H1 j0 C" FI want to confess that I love you,
' x0 G3 G3 R& x) x+ M+ k/ @. r我多想向你表白
But I never did
1 T7 S& p" d1 G* `却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 F7 F5 r2 X2 g: V" g$ @" O# v只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
" R+ k9 x: B- C: |* H假如还不太迟
5 r* {5 h; Y1 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; v$ f6 l" \4 Q, T3 b. D) J% t& i今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
3 ], o' t6 U! N+ N' cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) x* Y8 k" {4 XCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
! C1 e2 e: a# O: \7 y5 K从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
) g/ z" U& g" H. ~8 D
Can I entrust it to you?
$ ^; L, n0 `) _* l& \* \可否将它托付于你？
9 B5 m0 n: R4 nEntrust my love within your heart
. N. C4 \2 y' U从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
6 U% p& G$ r1 ^" V- P# H9 r3 K老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
4 a; b/ x% i; n5 f$ e: b. j: M4 X, {老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
0 b5 I% `2 y3 f% U3 ]4 {vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

  Z% J1 Z1 T" [$ L4 }不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。