【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ ~9 B! |8 ^$ kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  {. f, h9 _8 P7 W; y" p, t6 H! rThe sky is happy down to its soul
. b* d# v* t: TWith the moon kissing it every night
2 A) }  V8 T& `" SSeeing the sky content with its love
) V4 l- G. B) ^8 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) G! ^: F- C5 q: L- v2 @3 jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- C. b5 A! {) v. B7 \+ O3 Q+ u  GI love you I love you with all my heart
) E' A) y: {* k- HNothing can compare to my love
6 O+ M9 w! T  W3 x5 L1 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ k( z3 A3 i' o  d) {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! C4 N7 U1 f! s, w, JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) `" r5 f5 }' @/ J3 b& HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. s/ P  E4 K8 s" C( fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 j: k+ P% v1 ?) U) U, w7 i5 j' _& LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( O" {6 a  z! j& t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; {/ G6 X: L+ q6 F& k& e: E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 k7 ~, h" |: O9 I( }) e5 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ m3 ]0 E' |3 B+ j( l4 q6 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 t0 V4 s1 z4 P  x! N: |/ e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! G5 M+ z! D  ?- D1 e' z! Y4 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' m4 Z  ]% H% W, i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 K& u* }2 y# y% T8 j* g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. O1 r/ P; v4 y/ v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ O: V0 a6 ?- ~0 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  f0 i" s1 l7 `+ @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 f1 r0 Z9 X! g/ L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 C: y3 B$ r0 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ g  u& @" _: u6 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. T) H- x' H/ _/ p0 f% K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 R) Z4 [: I9 x/ P/ A2 z  t/ E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 |, D5 V, M4 u  X! B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 P6 p- p! A  Q  k5 g4 y4 ?' E, J: L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 H; H- W& _  `6 X& \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- L. ]8 i8 c1 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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/ p+ v' O) p' m1 k% M2 ^) b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 g( f  I# Z, c7 [: v% e7 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 y# F6 S& P: j. O4 _% t) K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 k1 g: T$ Y1 h' u8 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" @& c8 t( W9 _/ f: a2 e# H9 {* h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, c6 y" f& v% g7 c0 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>