【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) ~5 s, Y5 K3 K+ t! w: \6 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- Z( |! C5 [+ nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 o5 g, G6 r* D6 r6 [  mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ j* Q6 A5 |5 ]. G$ h; `1 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 a  N% _" g! v" }  T5 [+ _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! `& S6 P7 v) R3 rSeeing the sky content with its love
2 U7 o6 A$ Q' wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& J/ n" T' K; ~2 ?$ yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* H! V3 U. Q9 Y) B( F2 g# p( YEvery other word you utter is love
. `4 d& ]6 [: h4 G2 W$ j0 [7 ?0 kI really want to know just how much you love me
+ K  m. Y& m. l) K# Z/ B* gI love you I love you with all my heart
# H, }% g4 f6 n9 t5 W% Y) ^Nothing can compare to my love
- x; [$ z; R; V! r2 [) H8 a3 b/ MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% |! B3 j$ k( k& rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ R8 _$ n6 i. e7 pI’m still filled with fear
  L* \5 y# I2 g  S; S$ sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( O) ?6 e0 G6 s% t) v" q+ vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 y: V, ?/ K: B+ v+ {) D) v1 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 A) O/ L- C& Y* Q" m" H8 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- {" y7 e- i% m  W2 M5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; o5 m8 G% h4 i7 l! a, J# v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 g" `9 ~  S/ R( {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 k" t: F* S9 b9 U6 X/ X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, f* E% d# G7 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 l9 ~7 M( V4 m# Q0 c! m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  h' ~9 _) {( W) ]& C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, z2 T, G/ U* \! T- T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  m; r4 l9 S8 w* c$ t1 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ ?! b5 G( q; y1 z! o! O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* M0 P6 ]8 t. h! u8 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* E7 l" A7 F2 S7 e0 {7 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- J( E! g4 L) o: I7 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' b( T+ z/ @* H& O( V6 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& G' n+ i8 E  s9 P! ]. @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' a* k% N3 }/ \* R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 _9 [; o2 Z& q2 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 H; k& T3 Q0 b2 e6 e$ l% e# z; D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! F; I3 z( I: R- |! g7 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 X- `& m$ E' }5 l$ x; K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! S- S4 w& O& L  S) }4 T; Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 y5 o& K6 P4 |' T7 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 O: S: r4 w# H9 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 h4 k$ J6 S' [8 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- B% |4 z$ [" N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) S* Y3 G2 `; {' L3 y- ~9 Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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