【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ L4 w( j, p( a/ X1 A" ?4 I, W& ]. S8 V9 u2 f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% x6 q5 _1 e/ x& \2 C$ }9 K  xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* }: C& w5 W5 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 g, J0 }1 n1 M6 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 Y4 k6 y- n1 M* |8 iSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! p* z1 l+ @1 O" l7 X" E5 {1 V/ cYou needn’t fear anything
- J, s: ?$ W: |" g  F8 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ^2 t- D$ }' r5 y5 {& w$ u- F- X4 fEvery other word you utter is love
' {- Y3 ~7 g1 H, I! A$ D7 HI really want to know just how much you love me
0 d5 ~0 c$ M" R6 _' b' cI love you I love you with all my heart
- L3 s" M. m8 U# a; _Nothing can compare to my love
4 ]: x6 u. W; ?# _: m0 _6 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ?3 _1 Y! c- vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( J! v1 e6 Z6 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, g- d8 S3 _; [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ L! T) V1 k$ \7 x' M' B$ c! OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) @, y& d$ p- ]! `0 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 w0 T) V, G, n( l) y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, o2 g2 b) }- v0 Q! j8 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ P& F, C- n5 Y/ @9 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ V) ~* w* @+ }9 r! O( s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: g( Y+ W( t  q7 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 y$ C: B! U4 ]" S% C& f2 l- E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- x* V# v' L) ?2 V: n5 q/ I/ G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ x0 D5 X* T( \: Y2 }; }7 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, \2 x$ o- y+ A% D, e: ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, g) G. }$ I5 o  d5 n% N<P>你无需担心</P>
3 Z5 _5 S' d& i9 b4 q' D( F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 X; \+ z' t: K" F9 x7 A$ E; \2 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( ^9 G6 z, |: N' L) X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Y" @3 K5 x2 @$ l1 U. g/ B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 M7 ^( L8 E3 p0 ^! s* G7 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; }, S8 \  {: u4 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# G6 W$ y9 c! g" p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 i* `1 D/ U' X  g) S& T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 w. x6 N4 a& g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 s( e/ h" q; _: B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 A9 q. f0 X/ @0 U: C4 _, w- l& N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ r9 N. h: A3 f# X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  a0 u' z! s1 Z" }  h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 {, Z6 ]$ V% ^7 [& H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  h$ u2 Y: q$ n% q! ~) R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 c' g3 r3 R  v+ _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 q5 U+ @; r( m! ?' ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 j) {) ~* h2 ?" B2 o: }我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 _1 T& ?1 j& I( E: o; S3 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>