【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( y+ H6 I- i) GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 W3 b9 J- k+ R2 H' M/ eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- i. S! C2 |* J9 v. GWith the moon kissing it every night
" V5 y; t1 F* hSeeing the sky content with its love
; n8 y& e$ B: y- TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: Q3 A( ?6 j) b- o: c5 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. J" G; |# ~% M+ mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 b. ]+ K# l1 C& a  ]; A# s$ ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( @$ R5 N3 t* T- JI want so much to see inside your heart
3 b# I: L# \4 z9 a0 e# ?) WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, I- |1 f2 H4 s" F+ t- w. _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A5 e' k4 X4 a+ i8 t- JWith such a tongue as yours,
3 o, Z$ \6 d6 i+ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, k6 g8 _3 p) i5 k- l3 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 E$ l/ O9 C) J$ {3 \9 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 F' S3 C& U6 z( }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 l; U+ ?# Y& Z+ j9 a+ m9 K, M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! l; I; k& P' R/ i1 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ^3 }; s4 Y* N* D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* M' A  w! U4 v% [; [& f* X! z/ S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 n2 b, H, Q% y4 S9 X3 U- z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 \2 p, M) _' B1 N' i) _* e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 |  {9 R  r3 N- V% q8 i2 ^1 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 a' n' U+ V2 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  }6 ]1 T5 v, r3 z" g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 n/ F+ J0 M$ K, I- B% Y+ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: o' f% ?3 u% a" c- O& Z) d% @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- z8 ~2 f8 M4 {$ c7 K0 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' |% x2 {, d2 i/ v" C, J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, S; ]* z3 U, I. C. ^" L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 W% v$ m5 o+ J/ P$ q2 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: {* F# q& {& Z" T+ N. p/ r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 {: f6 [& @3 R+ F8 z1 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) c9 k4 x* o" {( J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. s" d$ [% [+ G- P% n: L! r0 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; F. D$ o! s, M- `. x/ q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 I# \) _3 m. I! R- A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 R! m. @  w; \: r. e7 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, k. a' G% G( H4 M9 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! s; p* e  W8 w8 m2 r0 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) T% W5 C" R( \. T& |8 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 S8 j! i$ a9 ^& q+ h) k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' L2 a' I- K; C# G6 y7 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 P0 J, H( \. r2 m我请你剖开它

: F+ J! Y% c) V3 P7 @% t' L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 ~- v& P* E8 t# y' }/ K7 s5 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>