【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 `. X+ e! E& t  Y/ x: Q, fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: Z+ L" p9 V/ g) i$ S9 a; vThe sky is happy down to its soul
! ]9 R# F  w- c; ~# I( y2 l4 PWith the moon kissing it every night
8 l/ C0 I4 i" t9 b- r" n) E9 m3 A& ZSeeing the sky content with its love
3 b5 b' Z% z$ `. GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* @" c0 }2 i0 a  Y7 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 o2 ]% O& L* zI love you I love you with all my heart
  b1 D6 l5 s! Y! u9 b# \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 r+ K0 s4 q0 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% c6 N8 n& U7 s& M8 r- kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 W3 {7 d( B/ t9 uI regret not dying
3 j+ h7 O( y' W( X4 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 j& _% s/ N. P# Z$ g6 m3 ]/ r) wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 f4 z$ V7 k1 h4 G8 l) d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; A7 X' `, _+ \$ U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ X9 t& Q1 y" \% U* ^3 P5 V9 ~' a- D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 W% }6 L1 h% |. {. ]! p$ Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 T1 i9 B5 O) j8 v! c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 _$ s+ [* n( @/ c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) e& i' A  e  i) }1 o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 M  C3 x4 @9 k6 W7 O2 }6 v/ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 o1 ?- Y, K$ m' @+ |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 b; O" X8 s3 b. ~4 a5 C$ T5 A  q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ G+ Z& P* `6 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ X# F5 o3 z" b8 X  N# w# H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% `; [8 P! a  ~8 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: ~8 {5 J  ~. B  H: }; e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 Z* @/ U" ]4 H& H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ C* A4 H$ b2 i+ G) d5 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 g8 C! C7 A/ u# {: n7 _7 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ S5 f. q. e) u- U& Z/ \, j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 ~; _$ [0 T0 C0 Q, V<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Q5 A! K8 b6 N, d  O& z% B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 G8 U. ^# \3 T1 U2 ?8 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ a! m& L, ?$ H2 L# g" R" J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

# d* i% E! D1 Q& ]" y2 }4 I- A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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