【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 j# s5 c5 T7 W6 q8 `: z# j- n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- q9 m5 \8 s2 k$ h8 S% `$ p1 ]$ H  HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 q; m* I8 w0 @6 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 h( g& l2 c5 l6 ~  i8 OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- C- X; b/ F: n+ F. G2 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; t$ z/ A* c, T7 s4 _( G# n7 WNothing can compare to my love
1 S0 P$ l; E3 x# e' q. t$ ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: y+ D/ o4 |# `* H' G7 {7 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! f* P2 ]4 ^* {1 B9 _- s! n9 RWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 N! x; d1 \! F* ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% m6 O7 o1 L' a  V" c5 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! c0 l; y* f: Y# ^9 P. k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. }9 `/ _% X5 M- b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 N) N+ j" F; B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! a  @5 F* c6 ^, B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 h8 R& `8 l2 x  v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 e5 \/ o, z( U3 q7 F2 y* ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  i- t6 _# H( b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. m3 r- R( B* Q! C$ f6 r# j, G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: C7 o& Q1 ^9 v9 l: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 _4 m7 E3 k  O9 v3 Q0 i  s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ E: @5 V' X% X, C7 v2 i% N- o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% j( ~8 Y0 A* a- F4 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( _* u+ F# A7 C1 Z' {' Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Q% N3 K( v, r* v0 S/ \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ n6 X8 a" _3 C) _% ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 S% U" a2 [' w/ x) l  d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 A9 M: l, F* N9 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 K9 z# C# a0 l# v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( H  L. s& Z& _6 M" s) r, T& q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 Y3 q/ P9 t* j) K" f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 o5 q- e: A! S/ j+ z! K. v6 p" E8 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 s; a! `! Y) ^3 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 ~2 s( `( K& U8 y6 @& w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' W9 j- F3 L4 r4 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ^) j, D1 a. l, ^) {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 ]( ]; v( y1 Z$ {3 _# N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 J* V" t+ H. _% h5 P% M& b: ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ^2 J/ U% Q; `# k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>