【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 D6 B( T( K5 ~7 p4 S- C; V6 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( s; U- M5 s2 ^; @: L! H0 p+ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& u/ a7 E, }4 D4 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 Q( ]& o3 L3 I# E! p- ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: z! c) Q( e4 a" n( ~) G$ AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& P& T, t  z+ ~6 A8 |" W. i2 G! CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; b. i) H3 X4 m; ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* q) o0 Q( `2 UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 U  B) C# W1 `9 O9 j$ ?3 w  Z/ l& }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 j" F9 D- m5 d! L+ o: O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, i, E/ g! Y1 C  m& ]) p* n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 T; o: k4 |: ^. d8 s4 V$ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; i4 V; z+ _. s$ L. B# ?% A# _' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ X8 i! K5 W5 E! |* [& }6 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 K& f! |) q4 O- G! P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. C" v5 m* Z) i* t7 b<P>你无需担心</P>
% h0 W& j# V- G7 K, `. [4 }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: z6 a$ E/ U$ D3 p( \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, _; r6 m2 H( l8 B6 l' p6 m9 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" b. _* v, l7 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ X& p  l" r  B2 ~! A7 H$ |3 ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ B. [2 }  w" Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 a* [0 H9 F2 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( u# Z( _8 J6 |9 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% E. j3 x) C- d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% o* q1 A7 Z9 ?) D) v$ W9 m" y5 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! s0 b# s( ]1 n( K7 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# V  m1 Y7 ~/ b7 N$ ~- d0 l# `$ f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 C6 f/ c$ S, m( ~( F6 H% ~$ F5 |6 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" \, p8 J+ f# n  I5 [+ o* r& s<P>I regret not dying</P>
. i" E1 y& s' [4 I3 w* q' M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  \- U. \& m; M2 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 y* A* p+ t3 f/ ^: U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 k, N4 ]( Z% \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _  J6 ^6 m$ T/ f2 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 W" ?+ C) `3 q) R$ U7 O  y5 ^2 V5 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 X, p2 B3 C/ w+ n2 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 O! T( s4 ]% C( k! P' ?. ]: [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! ]; B; C5 _2 M, f8 d' ]% ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>