【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- S% H. o% [2 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, U8 C' \) v: D" w, V& uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 B5 P) ]- g; @7 R$ W+ H* |3 U* y% aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 `/ p8 u, ~" r; HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 b/ Z0 h4 Y& a& BSeeing the sky content with its love
* Z& T, k( ~3 }  [" s, R) v0 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 L+ A/ r4 [8 `0 e: CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 y" h. A) o% i) Q1 d/ G$ W7 q/ PI really want to know just how much you love me
. D+ t2 v, C* E! u/ X. Q+ NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) p" o6 t* V( ]9 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 C, ^" x3 a! d: |, kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ f) \/ d, P/ O" H9 l5 r+ ^/ HI want so much to see inside your heart
/ f6 `* A& ?7 r& K4 V% H1 U/ u% l1 V; {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! L3 D* f) R& B9 w/ K; TI’m still filled with fear
2 n) x% n) w% iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 T/ H# c5 ^9 b( F# c6 M+ K% BI regret not dying
( Y, T; ]# E. o  \' C5 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 t. k1 O$ C  Q0 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  L9 m8 i3 @% w, D- ]6 V: e+ e( _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 c# V% E' l+ f, g" A2 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 N. V$ W3 K- ]' Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) s5 @8 N6 w4 F9 L  c' X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ k6 U# P! M7 q; t6 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 T. }  R' F( u& a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# {) X" z& j+ b4 Y0 f$ P) u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 Q, L- E, D- }3 _6 F( h' g' e7 r4 G<P>你无需担心</P>
" W- C$ t' l0 x' k# u) @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- L* g* S* S* @. Z; g( T) |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# {  g( y2 X. V# y6 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' g* Y* G7 ~2 B, N9 N9 d6 O' ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" w- c9 d5 }+ _& Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: k* U) g+ b# _8 Z9 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& U- M' a3 A, _. s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% V6 w+ C$ O5 w3 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, u, C8 o( I5 E3 f2 R4 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  ~1 d& |: x" p) y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 d1 ~4 `& q! S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 H& Z) Z. g& r: c+ s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>