【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, ?3 @5 g0 M. v' b: V! `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% w& R+ d9 _) E. o* fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 k% ~6 \: p5 CIf today isn’t too late,
$ e2 Y4 \9 P- ^* WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 R* G3 ^6 r* e) q/ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* J8 M, i% r1 y7 @7 F9 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. Z( `. ~2 A+ ~- ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% y9 s( |9 ^8 n  z2 ~0 W8 M9 l( [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% q7 J0 r3 n& y3 o& v6 _If today isn’t too late,
1 Q& G+ M# S4 y: ~, f5 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' E" b! n8 p; Y8 n- C- U7 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; b7 Q3 R9 G$ qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 J/ w( Q: W" R' {0 H2 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. z, ~! x% k- e* c4 U# O* ]% W5 N- u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 @; j; a. s2 d5 j* W/ R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, |5 U- ?2 y3 Y7 b0 o" k2 o" K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 k8 E% `% ?: M' I( l/ t$ k; H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 Z& I+ P  p) p% C4 b2 Q! y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ z* u& ~1 W& r* T* ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# S  D9 j0 i# W5 u: S; K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% S! z4 h$ M6 ~0 z: j6 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! c: `7 Q' Y9 P) y. {% y/ r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* x7 m6 J0 [2 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 T$ O9 c- e; |. _8 I3 D4 |7 I  f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- b  E6 Q( C1 R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- ~/ Q' Z: I; f. G& R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" m6 c: b7 J% \" L! y' t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! D" ~, |6 `: @$ A3 _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( [3 }- y( f. k6 k1 o, _+ S/ U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( E0 D; b. k8 {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 z& y0 |3 t3 X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 j. c8 o6 x  r- y2 {& C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* g* S. ~- o7 i- f/ H5 ~. c  [<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! h3 G. R* r/ p* K- |) _0 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ^7 b7 P; S8 f8 o: R' O/ ^( J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! T2 N5 E1 @+ k<P>但我不会 </P>
4 B5 X: i2 K* V+ V$ C) h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 A9 s5 B# i0 ^2 ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 m- T$ y$ Y5 e8 B( V. O& k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 X7 ~6 G, s0 \/ F# }; R/ a* \( _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) r/ y) Z. F3 h0 b7 U6 S& v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ?( q. @* R7 L0 O8 |# A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ }% S$ s* B( N1 {% z; c! f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ @; g* j3 l) [* L* B- D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 C+ v% M8 e& [+ Q1 ^; J  h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. O4 O7 b7 X% P8 B6 }& j* S, X 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 o/ ?! ~) {1 u, h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) m2 }' F7 c* ~( N9 D  s$ k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ]; i% ?! B3 n4 d0 O5 k9 d" w* N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>