【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
) D  w0 d5 L* _5 r* C+ mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ |. V3 v8 E( oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 h( h) v, M; F( u# L& X0 P* J5 V0 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% `3 n4 X- n# K& K9 [/ Y0 zI want to confess that I love you,
: `/ H& |" T+ q$ |8 ~  oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 I0 Q# s. h9 }9 `- F  mIf today isn’t too late,
, ]6 \- H2 D2 h, j% _: BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* q6 Z( [; v. d( _Can I entrust it to you?
+ R/ \3 p2 p. l* ~5 F. B2 CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: e' O; O& o( aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, _: `6 Q/ j0 U2 B% p& FBut I never did
- Z, x; V8 k) R$ X) u0 F* ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 M( D# O4 U/ C  wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

2 I* L) U- O+ }5 F+ w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* \' f( G* F( V5 o# g; m3 q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 @- `+ x6 v* f! j# C' O7 M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* @" [# d" s# T8 G. D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. ?4 M- p; D, H8 V: N$ a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 f3 a7 X( N: y6 F, F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! r7 ?0 w. b" e2 E1 |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 L& d0 V9 X0 V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 E8 ^2 F( ?) w9 N! [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* }% U" L5 |4 @& S! d6 X  Q- c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ I+ X& ?# |# ^4 t+ V) G- ^# }. v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 w' V8 P( A- Z( j4 p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 \* J# l# a) V+ f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! e: N& u) h% a- R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 N( S  R8 k) {/ F6 K1 P, q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, g# o+ J7 G# R/ n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 X* [( V! D2 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 N" O" T) V7 A( U# P1 i3 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 a% M; Z, O. H2 {) j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 M6 N4 L3 j: t4 _- ^' u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 z$ G5 Z5 g) X+ p' g' _) \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& ^8 {. s& d9 N1 z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ r5 ?4 Y  M1 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" {1 ~: l# \! r. E* [" g0 Y- N7 ?3 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, v' x& N( i9 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) r2 `" n$ e4 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 }- ~! ~: S1 R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! i0 h( w# J" i/ | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 T6 T* L; q) d' C5 |" b7 ]4 W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 @- V1 b5 `. r8 @% u$ C& G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 M" t! R' F0 i( ~. @; F9 b! o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; N! [- `* _/ k2 m7 @3 W/ x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>