【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( l- L- O2 N6 m4 Y* |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. B+ j8 B$ |  P9 o/ q& |From the first moment we met,
8 g5 T" M+ H( \, N9 |: Z) BI already loved you with all my heart
' O% A/ t& h( C! E: ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- U6 B7 R4 ^9 f. C# d2 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
' f6 f( g: V$ e' B# B% L+ Y& FI want to confess that I love you,
) D+ I9 N) F) _9 s9 ]But I never did
+ e, d9 L5 b) o7 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" q3 c! }) |* X7 y) F3 r7 G% AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- n7 D, v" ?' c" [: ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 c7 `5 v1 A$ w, V/ Y7 OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' n% p9 c) [: N( T0 ~Why is it so difficult to express?
% F, N- g3 K$ b- zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' A! O3 G& f) U! s" n+ gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' I. {) P0 R0 i; l/ JEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& E( Q, }% o+ C0 k1 J& g, k1 cEntrust my love within your heart
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" _. N8 B6 f1 h1 w" O% U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 O% _  w8 r6 d& q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 R5 o# R( N" |! ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# q6 t5 }( i* A  v  j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 z) C  D/ P) f/ [! X: `) n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( o+ n( |8 u; z8 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) k2 J/ G/ @; E2 ^  L8 ^/ o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( L- y! {4 w9 \) c9 r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 a1 c6 V% p% c1 N( d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 I0 S0 Z$ t4 t5 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& k( X' a" f4 j% x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 G( g1 T# }! D- c  @2 T, b) E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% \: Z4 J, I  W2 v. J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# {, A. b2 I4 E* O) V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 K4 u1 }0 S+ v  o& z* o) Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# t8 s3 L* O, p4 G. g- B+ i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- i$ w$ }( |$ F2 |4 v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 y( h5 \% @5 s8 Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* ^3 \' m4 ?; p$ t* A( i9 J: s# Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( o( p) a' ~1 s- B* Y$ [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. u. Z' \) C3 ^4 `: \1 h1 y" E* C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 p6 z; |  h, ?0 G2 s4 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& @) n! d9 A( w; h' `+ S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: p. a9 a( |8 d/ ?7 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 k2 p/ e0 b8 G( {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: N; E; n" J1 z9 j6 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) e9 v) t' q8 c8 x1 h  E/ i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 O+ n- C2 d% j/ V/ J& I* U; Q9 o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ k3 y$ m/ n* W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>