【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
" g$ y1 b, e# x7 R1 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( J: }* x' H  ]5 i* m% zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, O: H" f  M3 iWe meet and talk everyday,
, ?$ b. O! f1 c2 {9 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* D8 I6 b, y; K* N7 EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, N: V0 a, h! s+ @/ r5 W+ u3 hLove… just the word love
* g- J& p* ^+ L% X4 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 m7 u) C4 U1 Q/ D% KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& ?$ l  J- _8 p' D) w- L3 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 z6 q9 g4 L1 \1 l& z- i+ l3 hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 V( p& F& j/ vLove… just the word love
7 u: [: _4 y6 \  dWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ m+ R2 M$ F% s7 ]6 c9 aI want to confess that I love you,
, J  d! U$ d, `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Y$ P& J- w* f1 B% p& nIf today isn’t too late,
- L) `4 J* ?" s! LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
* A$ N7 M+ r2 a! e7 S9 Y, O( vEntrust my love within your heart
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% ?1 C5 e+ P7 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ D# y2 `1 {. T! N: P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, l' J2 S5 ~$ X: s, x- n4 X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 V7 `1 o0 z5 E; T( c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 {! t  }& T  |) x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- ?* a+ t& I. E2 n" p, g2 T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 k: Y' O$ T" e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# t/ R7 R4 I, @; V- \6 Z. z8 C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' \( u6 l1 h% C: r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! y, p0 G1 L8 b4 h$ v9 R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ \& f. Z, Q2 ~; r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 e! R# {% Y1 [- ?8 g5 T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 V  \2 F6 H8 A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. M! O+ h5 j$ d: Q/ z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) B8 L, U5 r/ \3 ?7 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- V  n# V. c# I6 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ [. ]. k. J  C- Z9 Y' n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ y7 e3 E/ O# K' {! m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 I: F) R9 L6 e8 Q9 l1 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 \4 q" H# Q* \/ h! V! b/ c2 G) c! z* F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& Z3 B/ |5 G$ s. i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 Z7 F7 L  [" ^- g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  l5 a, }" }; h" M7 [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! s. C$ A4 \; i8 \2 F: |# p6 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 w1 }) t! O/ _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 E( _4 K  Q2 W) }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. W; D2 X5 [" x! j6 x3 N' X' \4 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 ]4 L, m4 {9 v4 M+ m) G; G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 `' |5 W- d, w3 u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 J/ }4 A2 Y1 }$ s* Q! Y- ]* W: K% z7 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 B& [  h  o( `# W/ E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% U9 L5 Z9 ?/ }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 s. x- u) i3 @/ \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 ?$ M: @3 m2 A3 L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>