【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 m  d  O; I8 p$ e2 D0 ~I already loved you with all my heart
2 H2 S. t% K4 l5 NWe meet and talk everyday,
/ O8 V5 @) t! b8 ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ F& F) ^4 D% G' LI would probably know how you feel
3 N& @9 \0 b& K6 x& J6 M: _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 E6 w* v5 e- J5 B  D+ SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. V4 F4 f8 J6 b% S; |- ?) LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) u7 ~/ ^2 e* y: Y4 _Can I entrust it to you?
$ C% ]) h8 r- u# REntrust my love within your heart
/ x3 |3 G5 G* T( v! w) T- gLove… just the word love
: ]7 ^& o; u* O7 J! b  pWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 J- F: ]$ }& P- M% J0 P3 N0 i- RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 _  N& ~( z+ T4 r& ?0 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! ~7 _/ Q4 C4 y* zIf today isn’t too late,
( F& q/ N+ [. TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) f% S4 D" z1 A4 M2 ]# q. T, x' n& R, YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ q/ j) S. C4 p! [* N: X# sCan I entrust it to you?
" a" {- ^( e& y2 M9 P. sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; I' c* g% {) h0 W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) c' `" M+ c, ?/ q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' }# ?% B2 ]8 c& ~1 f) F3 L7 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% w7 V! K7 [" O0 v) A, V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 d; ^7 G. }3 Z5 ~1 Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 `% q2 A! u/ H' D9 u2 f- e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  t' ^. ?. Y: `' V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 y0 h2 ^: a4 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; t' T: [+ z8 `, S$ Y0 Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ X: p! N5 e6 I4 G9 t) i9 H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 `1 [! E5 u0 ^7 b/ r2 f! t% _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& O2 S$ f' z, [: P! P- p3 s, G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. x) j& l  F6 a0 }5 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 k* d1 k* @; i! f# h' h( Y, W- Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 S! M( q' I3 h7 V4 M- P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; ?3 n) h' T7 i/ k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, H9 ^! K; Z6 Z! J0 v/ x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: Q& [; \/ c3 ?* V- u- j" p7 O) m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! L9 `" p. Z* _7 G4 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. _+ Y* `! ^: f$ f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 C3 j/ E, e( |1 N+ L6 G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 Z  v/ N' [6 G+ f: V/ d<P>但我不会 </P>
" i) M  M. |+ k8 L# f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, S  x7 P: o# ^' q2 T. C6 C6 z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ Y* E, J+ j9 D( M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  X, }4 U) o! y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! I% g2 N9 i. P) e2 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 L( q9 \) x- x' [3 s" Y4 z  y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 }' l/ _; N( R6 F: e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. p& _/ w& m+ R7 l( d' @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" q* X6 `: n9 C9 E2 Y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: N. Q" v% u5 b: p# ]1 R& P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>