【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" y6 L+ o! ]1 c( cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 x2 ?& k* R  JI already loved you with all my heart
: W7 r: |& X+ y7 A" yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* t- c$ Q  S. q. a/ M- qI would probably know how you feel
( N9 h! ^1 k7 `9 N/ O3 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" z& N/ N& n3 A) mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( z% A$ X  S) B: L& F- q0 H8 WIf today isn’t too late,
$ e; Y/ X* p( q; z/ U1 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 w) W0 K/ c- ?5 u, I$ F/ jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, U3 l! r  C8 Z4 R6 e% QI want to confess that I love you,
# R6 N7 D* h* Y5 Z9 ]' A' kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 _. }; H: i. {2 E" l/ w4 I3 Q4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ G7 [1 x# O0 b# e8 B; uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( N7 L3 v( X- h3 j6 T! fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" k7 R2 b! b) x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. S5 d* k1 v! k9 a, e1 e/ \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 h  @4 K; e5 J6 \+ ~0 E9 q0 h0 \  _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  Y- Q9 O2 x2 e+ t0 g1 L5 I0 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* O/ X& R  p, x: u& M3 a. N+ E2 \( a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" R8 b! O* C6 \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 U, d# U: r! K& G: ]: ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" |" Z& c- P, m7 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# ]8 {/ B  I: Q  F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ A1 I6 O! p# Z( q9 P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  `* H. q6 F, x9 [# m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% i1 u# x3 z6 |) g( E& Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) o! C/ W) k7 p0 b# K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, S( B" j& E$ l  i/ |5 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ j/ a/ B' T3 O  u0 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* N2 c: M  z" e7 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* D9 s7 Z, N1 j6 i- c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- f2 l) s! J' \3 ~* D/ Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# ~# a* L: H% n6 q3 P/ m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% l# I* F8 N- n8 p% d" Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 z# w; O! w7 |  c9 t" G* J. Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! r6 c; m9 N2 R# p6 D! Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 V: o$ Y5 e3 G7 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, \: M2 A% P' n& J. t  s7 W, `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" @) M1 j: x. [" p, M' ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 J# u9 u5 v* ~$ L# Q9 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! _, s5 A0 e/ F: \. g' ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' [" T6 Z: I& u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 y* Z: s- M  b' ]* k7 `& O3 n. B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" j. ?& @6 p. u2 {+ c% k2 D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( @$ u6 b, N- w. e0 R5 h2 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% M1 i) q0 d9 p+ a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  q( L6 m& B5 u7 ~5 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>