【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ u9 h0 t% G9 z+ L) S6 D! G; U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# U  F0 A" B1 eFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 A0 y2 u0 J  L# h- m4 MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) a, X3 c) S: [3 z+ P6 I3 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) Y& Z6 Y4 n/ o3 {) x$ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
( h  g7 \& z! R9 m- `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: x) b) \$ J% p* X& [9 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 L4 Q' z. q& W. \* o% EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! ?/ y% Y* g6 l7 o$ SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 K9 b* O* {. A' `& X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ z  l' d8 D' m$ \2 X! }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 T  U% h& z7 E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ H5 ]5 {$ C1 p9 C1 N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' {8 b  m! g. e/ x; b) X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  f7 t% I5 n% V$ y/ \2 m  o: ]: E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( \4 i4 }* J! |/ C& M1 P; @6 I% B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& q7 `; |* W( r* c/ l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ g5 U$ g1 g; M7 Z$ i- I+ L3 u( Z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( }2 A( o. O8 L8 E  }& a" U+ S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% m0 l3 m1 l7 s' `+ m) `2 [<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 x  P; x2 v8 r/ }- v. ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# T! P: T2 R- t( Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 i! Z2 `% P9 I9 E" }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" X5 f6 C' T* p/ V0 n0 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 X0 s& j. T# [9 Y  H& B" t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, Z7 O0 D3 w( T0 _4 g2 T  A' Z9 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% F% R0 y, j) O/ u0 W7 U0 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" K2 f! F% l8 o; g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' h2 ?, d" t8 R; B2 P/ a& b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 Z3 P/ s# Q: k3 C8 J" L2 j6 O! M, r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; T+ S) v: _$ g+ m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! z# z+ z- z) [- C5 W! {( z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ ]0 \: {$ {# c" \5 s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 f3 d/ @, t+ n/ y& w1 [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  r' i4 E6 |( k0 I' G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 o* ]' L3 c! }0 k3 C8 W, `  w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 h6 c1 j8 n* O+ x% K7 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 r$ g  Z1 B- @$ ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! E8 z3 Z  ~! w# n0 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ f, f" u# L7 Q: d$ C/ O1 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 S# e6 H9 t' E/ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 A0 R% I4 {5 \5 Y+ U$ s7 `. c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 s( \. r1 e( f; n8 b# S# W1 S 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% e/ N7 M' _; P/ }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: C5 b0 c  [8 G2 V+ ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 D; |9 u+ Q1 b, S+ b, l( U3 G6 D8 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>