【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
0 e" ?0 @9 |  q$ q# ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; u# K) z) C+ b3 u' W8 Q# K2 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, s6 e6 U  ~3 GWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 p" @4 p! Z* qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 J, t  E$ ~2 h7 _* O7 KIf today isn’t too late,
8 I6 C* O! X: CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 C4 Z/ v7 v9 ?3 d7 P, k, T% JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ [1 i# @. R% y- N! i: CEntrust my love within your heart
+ U+ M# k! H& q( ^Love… just the word love
9 |; t8 r- o+ _9 z3 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- p  ]/ ]' k3 o6 `! p# hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: G( n. k, F# JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 L1 K7 J7 R4 m4 p3 UCan I entrust it to you?
2 d$ @7 A6 s! M* Z( r" wEntrust my love within your heart
# M2 L) v; a* G4 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" w+ v; G9 d, `) @/ q: ?$ G<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ k. \7 |& B9 ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 P; A/ m$ S% ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 S1 p) m% D; `2 H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 Y7 r/ R. E* G# z1 h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 g" ~, C3 K$ l- f: s/ X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: E* o' S* K7 N1 J- Q9 G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 I# q+ _. O$ o3 U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# S5 @& z# L8 S9 N& k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) \: U6 B+ L& L: i, Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# Q+ b  d  p$ N5 }<P>但我不会</P>
. @4 @4 O) E2 Q. ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! _& y+ H4 d4 [6 ?" m# Y* d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" d. z2 b# k  {9 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 [6 L8 w& E# ?) i. W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& e: T( {5 v$ R- \) C8 @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 n* ~) P3 g3 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) L& H" _; q; ^5 ]# Q" U5 D, }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# m, S, t: H; `# ?! D, _. ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  H5 O; ?. q- k1 K, a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& `. G! H  I7 u3 F" t  ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" g: _) w& h& A- s0 Y! p7 F% F9 r! ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  ?, c3 f7 \! \, i- d' [" N! T6 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' r( ~3 p; l  }. b- |& _. x) X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: E" Z0 A+ N# Q; s8 [4 L; y2 H0 Q0 x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' p5 {# x4 I) b7 K! I+ g' u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 v7 a1 P3 a6 B1 T: o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" Z3 e+ i8 h/ c1 s# |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, h+ r# G# y3 Q( W( n5 K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ }& D4 H% x/ |% S5 E2 }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 [7 P5 B( ~/ \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 P+ |2 q( r; u* x+ e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>