【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. P2 @0 v" m0 {& ]  k  q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  f3 A2 a7 L" q1 i. F: rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ I! r5 t3 c- O7 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 K4 O0 R: A- W; F) USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# j/ g6 ]% u( f1 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" g9 I9 @$ u8 p# |. V+ w" H7 ^Every other word you utter is love
9 ^) d4 d* b) |) {  KI really want to know just how much you love me
# u( ]# W# H/ MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 ~1 a: A2 L5 p. J! N: ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 E$ ^* ~# q1 ^9 _% fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 s) ]: O8 {8 _7 s1 H; WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 a7 u0 T- i; u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 t8 o! n  l" d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& C; ~; x6 O# s7 |& S) `) Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 m- _5 Z% x$ _" B7 W7 Z1 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- y/ e: c/ ^, p. P* S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 w# d, }* |: d8 K8 M- D( a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. O5 H; {6 P6 s& ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. l4 ]9 s9 R  o6 l% c0 A' w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 q2 C$ N# J+ j2 t2 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, i) E  p, i8 C& T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ?, f' W6 [. o. e% n  u6 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- Q0 x& [5 }2 a7 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ~4 |7 H  c7 ^7 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& Y5 a( W! }! l- c# m# R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; j9 U# w* f  |0 b+ p# n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& F" O; h( U% Y4 {& y7 U3 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! g: M( P1 q5 [: u* l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; |3 I0 a& S% b4 x& Y( Q- y- R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ n: H! ]" U7 `! i3 R- j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- u$ D. e' K8 J$ O. \- U! e8 z5 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% |6 C; k" Y$ j/ q5 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  J) o; B# M7 N' g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 r) z9 i9 x$ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# S. D" C- ^. w0 c' j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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# E/ }0 ~1 y, \2 U& Z: f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>