【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ S% ^+ D& u+ Y1 o- d% h* J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* |: B. K4 n" x1 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 w  W0 A0 I2 I7 J' C4 {( L; eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( e' ^4 z& t2 w& n1 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" i' w3 F+ N% Y, f8 FSeeing the sky content with its love
- ]; |( J$ M- f. W9 U6 D; N3 D2 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! S9 e, G! U8 C1 j& e2 nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) X/ l2 ]* g6 {1 c) X: M5 b5 a' Z- M. |I’m still filled with fear
2 [. p- L, w+ t) q& N+ J! EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 X4 q5 D) q' q; }2 W" N+ m2 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ m! D5 l7 `* d3 O. t) X( p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! [2 l/ ]1 T0 q  S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  l, o) r, x0 U$ |: j$ Z! L7 F$ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' e; {8 p  p, i2 [, V% ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  b5 c! L! j+ c- x" s! E- r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 X# a) ?, j7 F$ w+ |- x+ Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 v7 D9 D' A9 V% ]2 G% X1 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* k, F. e" a4 a+ K7 t4 E# N6 `7 V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 H; T! o. Q' A( p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! g$ ]3 ]" k+ j  {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% q: k1 y3 [. H5 [( q% i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! g) }) s7 p% z5 `, }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 c0 c- h; a  S/ P' {% c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ D% Z# \  T8 s* P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- y% `- ]5 G+ p% w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Y( w7 J$ M7 z: F0 [/ `) L) u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ A& Y# k% U  b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 K6 \; ~4 [0 @# @- z" \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- u6 N0 j" I( m/ v; Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: a# J4 ?$ {9 B) h% s" e( J% X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% H' H9 ~, X  _  q. I' I  B<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 z! F9 ~; t: o/ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ [. P1 f/ b* K* c- V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, h5 S# K% E8 |$ S( O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  b, N! `$ T4 `+ j$ F2 F& k' W0 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 q# E4 L# Q: {* W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 b" F& e. \7 R  `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ }; c1 r0 h! o5 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 z2 |8 `# b8 i) d( Q* i0 X! [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ Z" x0 G  m' F: E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* j( S* G  L) c$ N& m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. W0 e" x3 B) j- r* ^  U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 W& W, r. w- k' R我请你剖开它

# q) {  w: d. ~0 G* T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  N6 Q' @! a0 K' G, v$ _% C: q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>