【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, X5 o* x# k7 Z( F+ P" l6 j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ D2 [  D+ z0 @) o8 f4 w; k3 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 a; T- t* Z) W  Y% RThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 x, F1 Y8 b' L8 }$ @6 _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ J9 }2 b! U! W7 `7 N. P# J: tYou needn’t fear anything
* R$ _& e- O4 g5 t( n$ M0 ^( ~; R. JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. Y/ ]9 n; j* fEvery other word you utter is love
8 L0 h/ K* ^% mI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 `" r0 {/ J  [/ q3 y5 L) wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 i6 e0 n1 }+ S% E, e  fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ K5 M6 X8 r0 O# ^* f% s" QWith such a tongue as yours,
/ M3 c8 @  o8 z7 ~) S" S5 Q" p7 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' \$ e8 M/ ~1 YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: L9 r6 {* k/ F  o9 s/ h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ g! `' f- T% |4 F2 L  b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% q2 Z, Z; s6 l& G2 t( ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) J) ]  E3 y; Q) _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 p+ c( c6 Z/ N9 q5 X/ K; r( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! u& t, \0 {8 s, ~6 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; _/ K9 ^( n4 v5 @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' B- W! X2 e  r) Z& k. U8 y2 b/ [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ n/ y* U" U4 p; Q) a" j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 u% t) Y5 q, b1 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ O, `: ?8 _( C) Y; n+ H* [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; ^, V, [7 T0 L& {. N  q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 n# r5 F5 j; `0 Z4 u5 d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& {- l& Q6 x5 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& R2 r! `7 w  S" h0 k, q8 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 q& H" ]  E% \/ T7 [8 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* g7 x7 |# {; ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 C: I" m3 |5 s' c% }) ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 y% g$ F1 M' H+ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 W- U1 y! l, p  O9 @$ f2 U0 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 d% p' M4 M4 j3 w. r( }% a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 M  P( M2 B& T  ?* h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# b, q3 |! f- t) R/ \: o( a$ g* S% s$ Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 l1 }8 Q6 p/ O8 @& ?, l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 \8 y) W- s# A; D9 S- B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>