【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 v0 d% J% u7 h  U. L8 f! K/ P. e( K' x我另将歌词附在此。
+ {1 O/ [" R5 \, p* UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; ~  t# [9 ]: kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 U# Y' i1 j$ [; N' J( n# GI would probably know how you feel
, c* _: u+ |5 f  S# cLove… just the word love
7 r7 O4 e$ h4 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" k1 D0 f; l& d% S, r, pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) ], }1 _2 b: G% U, R3 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ b/ u$ V# j& \, b, g7 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' E" w# Z) ^1 z& r" q4 x  N& |2 NCan I entrust it to you?
- S4 c8 _8 |' t4 f0 rEntrust my love within your heart
' u* k6 Y8 q3 K/ kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ r9 W5 D7 W. u5 hBut I never did
1 o9 o% g( s, Y. J( z  m1 t, xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& m2 F% Z, v0 q- Q) o6 p- ]. k$ IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! E/ H. F8 i( k) {& {' @6 rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ S% f7 s$ f4 i1 G3 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 S5 s, K' N  c" P. @5 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 G* C/ c) f9 N$ i" V/ `: A& }2 H( n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 O6 y! C- g0 O, t- Z! c7 F  P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- G  f: p( O6 g' s' B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 r% i3 y( I0 s; h$ H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ I- [5 F  y6 U0 ~: _4 |4 N4 q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 a0 _% J4 c- j1 P9 n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 Z; n4 L% g% [% U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) i; l' U; @: X! X1 f6 o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- U) P. m) ^+ Q9 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 ~! E3 X) U2 ?2 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 _7 B( g* I2 {+ q! k( [" y" }; G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ ?! X; _- T/ {) m" o! Y1 F2 y$ t, w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 A+ }/ H! R3 b$ B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! t8 _; Y# I- W1 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, H7 ~, [( j# T) G2 p0 W7 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% E- h8 ?# k+ o( }  P1 P6 Z( N5 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 i1 I4 |: }/ V2 m; g# t+ a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" P; R8 Z) e3 H% I" S. {$ I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( |7 ^. A- o7 ~' o1 n: Q/ O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. z7 \% g- g  E<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ M0 Y+ Z% A1 e* T, F) {* D7 M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 Z$ C6 [- p& A, H2 c. a: G<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) \+ b' Y) I6 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- R7 ^( p. Q3 B( `: }; `( d0 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 H) b/ H4 f% p5 ^6 @0 T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' T) l8 v( Y% I" X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- V/ \1 Y; h4 \! y; q2 \  P: J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: Y* E* V/ T4 V$ q$ v$ T0 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' |: p/ \1 L: f+ _/ v6 X/ D7 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. n2 ]7 F" T5 U' N: L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* R1 {! ^0 m3 Y. H  x. l0 |5 Y0 R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 q( p% {( g/ G& i% M) U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; T. x, v2 Z3 j! J7 B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ r+ X4 t8 X4 n/ t& b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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