【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ B* \7 M2 m" HI already loved you with all my heart
# j1 h: h  \- ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" k3 k6 C8 I  r8 ^- {I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ |- B; [. t: T8 `# D" FWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 X1 k0 }; |) g3 l9 _# WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" ^2 V% z0 n2 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ J) T; r1 a0 U2 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ ?( Y2 h! Y  `8 `; B, cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& m: p$ c! ^& ?7 T5 e% ACan I entrust it to you?
2 N5 n% B. B9 mEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 i' v/ \" B' U" m' C6 }I want to confess that I love you,
/ z% x! |' V$ \4 |, XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. V5 N" b7 ^) J) r7 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& M$ c$ V8 i! r& gCan I entrust it to you?
$ ]- u( i3 f$ R& d  U: yEntrust my love within your heart
: l0 ^% i! _8 d9 t  ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 r9 c9 k6 t( _/ M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- x8 P. h+ o2 e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 o2 D( Z0 D4 y8 h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# l* R; S6 n  f: L* O( H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 v' o2 k; r2 G9 u, o7 w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! z# \% L5 l+ v! j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. s2 @& Y/ g5 D2 U2 Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' D0 T4 n+ H0 E# y& j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- U; q6 q& ]% n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ y9 }7 z+ M. P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ P! W; @7 X3 T; G3 F* q; ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. v, E/ w3 D" E8 g4 j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# s; g/ ~; j" y2 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( Q3 {0 Q6 _2 f6 V# U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 ]$ x" s2 q. {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- `. F% \2 m9 A2 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* [( j! n6 O7 n- ?# g6 R8 P4 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 Z6 j3 c* s0 S) j8 m3 e/ A# {. `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( O, C' k' d; b2 {/ ~5 z6 R6 u9 q# I) ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, {' g% N, x6 }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 B( L& k- A% l; b* |$ r9 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 x6 _9 _0 L9 U$ E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 ^$ T- Z& J; j/ ^/ @: v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 p# H( Q$ p- O) L  N& |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) D/ i' A8 E  h% j6 C6 c+ |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ s1 W! W) t% B7 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 g: w1 C+ _- c+ V0 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( s* p9 {$ P- b( d' J' n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! S% Z4 Y* P8 K: M8 ^9 r0 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 A& B# h7 x. \0 R" W% W, @& M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ V) B4 |4 b  {1 |" r% L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ W( @2 T3 v2 e, k; S1 O5 W) L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>