【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  {5 m. I( J& [4 N5 M) A2 cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 S/ e- P: H" s/ a5 NI would probably know how you feel
& {+ x. @- d# Y! ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' F6 s: Q6 q1 e0 l1 `I want to confess that I love you,
7 z4 A3 M1 i* w1 ^, i+ ~5 f3 zBut I never did
& i& ^" f) |2 i& _6 ?! \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ G0 Z( b! I) W+ o: y1 A, _; `$ XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 b+ o. M# R" E5 t) G, s8 @Can I entrust it to you?
6 }5 r! E; {/ xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 B0 N' k0 S7 N& D" Q& tI want to confess that I love you,
: E& Y8 v' b) H: ]But I never did
; i; C- ]0 e' v$ jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 E. V3 y: H6 {# H0 lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 N( G7 f$ o* ~: M8 R2 _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ }) o0 d' _: {- o; p2 {* eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ V6 N5 a. c* d1 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 c+ M0 k8 i1 m6 n7 M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 V3 y  R; j( q1 [, T2 y; K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. h4 s/ L/ t! g$ M* V+ i2 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, R" i2 b7 q# ?) `" w3 O, i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 {  E5 S9 B. l2 g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" u3 O) A, p, Q9 S' d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ W( a6 K6 D/ G3 S; N6 x) Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  n# M7 U: w7 G5 U* `# B2 `4 ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 f, m0 ]8 f# X8 O: L7 ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, C4 s  m7 E0 i: B8 G4 Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 V4 o# f: O8 J) }# O: x0 n# Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: \) j- ~! `" p2 v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 P6 c6 [% Z1 X7 z, X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, A7 \0 R- ~( ]! d<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: V6 O* r$ m" r' L$ ]5 K& J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" t5 Z/ N, O8 o! n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* H, P! ?3 v" G1 ]& f7 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 i" o) q2 c+ H% D" R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& V" i" ~8 |, R9 H7 x6 q( n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' W* [! }) W* n0 g! Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 Y4 |# }2 |8 e" x$ w" I, ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% R& S& R4 _( U  t& `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. D- {/ U4 o) V8 z, t$ _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. ^6 P. T0 y% Q  `( j; M, ~7 J7 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 g7 q9 u! Q7 }! k! ]) N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' g. q& E0 `( G4 j+ s# g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 d5 b: X$ p* ^+ @8 [7 u6 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 i  `! I" i2 N1 J7 Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ ]% L9 J& c1 p! ?+ T/ p! T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! Q, j8 m9 l/ w8 }3 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% o$ x2 ~. F# s, V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) }7 n/ d0 G4 u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" i1 I7 _$ d( [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( J$ E4 P0 X3 v3 c9 ^! ^3 o6 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>