【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) X$ C* U  Z1 M2 c4 e8 G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ B( f# y9 }/ I) G, BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  \3 o" ~; ?, I' E0 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  n, T! b& s% lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 h* S6 t: A6 B# v! Y+ HIf today isn’t too late,
( j+ e' E& G2 O2 C  n- |  N0 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% l  {- A: m% w3 U( WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ X! `% e) E  A9 ~. w1 k% v4 vEntrust my love within your heart
  o6 T0 g& E% k8 P+ h7 ^) ~7 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 {6 V2 q4 q' W/ {: ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! c5 Q+ L, h: d# m# k' F; XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* X: l+ L2 _+ O' |6 ^' Z% Y: tCan I entrust it to you?
- Y! ~/ {9 @, A- c5 DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; Z. Y3 j8 b/ ~0 i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' T  y" n: n3 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ l9 [6 h8 g" v7 q8 j; i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  o( Y1 w5 c' S7 S& N, l0 S1 a, P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* c4 }/ r5 B5 }8 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- A) z% O  ?# U9 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# v. H5 _, y+ [$ |0 y7 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  H9 r! Q5 S9 B4 Q9 e8 b' L; n4 J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: s+ J, g. M, f4 _8 H1 J' `* @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! B) u9 _+ a9 F  }. ?# w) f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) j' b: ]& A3 m& c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, J# ^) S, v* e/ a2 I$ t+ @<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  t, S) M  t% m8 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( z+ k3 [2 v1 {. V* c4 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 e' J) a: Y$ i; |1 d& S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& P3 b! ~# |) {  U: R( `; ~8 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 R" U9 z4 s7 p7 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) T4 }. y" m* Q$ b" _7 ^* q* a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 _" \9 L  u' P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 X6 z0 T  C; K& U' ]2 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* g% k3 ~2 L- C# }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- h( |$ Q$ c* Y4 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 ?/ J6 K: l( ^* N0 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 _8 r% F; D7 o0 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& J+ J% J& `9 r/ u6 c0 R6 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ E' r0 p8 b( d9 b& S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  o7 D) O" O: S4 E: |1 Z, s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 }4 f; t# C  Y8 z$ h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ D8 F: @) E6 I4 z" I" L9 w# q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ \, a  g3 f8 A5 o- n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 q! w8 b& Q% L: ?- P9 Y0 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# O6 U6 d/ N- ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 M- o; k6 p5 ?/ Z1 ^# {1 K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>