【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* O. Z' A! I) }0 J  k/ e2 @2 AFrom the first moment we met,
6 F( h1 l; @: q4 k; uI already loved you with all my heart
( e+ ?1 ~+ C! U, z) i  fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( t5 W8 x; R- p: R8 ]2 `* w6 QI would probably know how you feel
. y" P8 Z  L& M4 u9 CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 W* n/ I! v% ^; o6 b9 ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ Q" e2 v/ \$ o' z4 {2 ]% qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: l+ j2 H0 t4 C" LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  Y/ p6 d( d5 J- `" N. q  Z' oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& c/ V1 F1 o. H& d: PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 d& A& n/ S4 b7 C0 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 ^" d- J+ ^5 O. I1 d: zEntrust my love within your heart

* C8 I: b, h! t8 k; d! _6 {' _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ G3 m$ P% A4 a: ~) F) v/ D4 V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 n7 l8 F+ F3 t5 F7 l- [+ ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 A8 C5 R! M2 d% i/ R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; N  ~# \# e! m3 Y3 N' f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. a2 h  `, ~4 ~2 q$ c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. d) Y2 ^. h. Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 n+ N0 ]' L; k4 o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( W  f' D$ a" X( @5 v) C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- Y) h3 M: V' U4 I( N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& A) z1 s( A  m6 @, {1 \# ^+ Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ F) }$ \& w, Z+ e8 J1 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 v& c$ x3 b. `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 L9 t. ]  k# O; F$ Z/ B) d1 s, ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 B6 ^4 i' k7 q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& `$ A$ }. z" w; m; P) R2 Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; A0 |& e" U+ g/ i0 e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& \$ P0 N4 w% M6 i% ]9 w/ }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. A% e* @( q+ E- T. T# W8 l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ P: V9 ^) a6 G<P>但我不会</P>
  F2 ]- n6 m8 y9 W6 T' H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 K/ @; }( m0 \  P$ |% E6 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 d# b" O' H  ~' H! ^  ?# C2 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( l' |3 z0 E1 F+ j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! _! I- I9 }; f7 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 [7 H  U% G0 _" {: [+ K9 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% z9 t" ]2 b9 j/ J$ ~$ E; e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! V+ r) E8 {- e3 @9 L' i( _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: W; R/ I$ I& @% ^8 I5 p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 V; E- o) R9 |( F1 y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 f  _" }' y5 i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 q8 e# G/ R. m( S1 |( S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 ~$ U4 n' Q/ \+ q8 c0 O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ Q$ i. k+ y, {8 C0 D' l# N<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! T; j1 A9 ~* b+ H; v. R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  d- P. z+ O( Y- m- N3 {6 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! C) N$ I4 q9 Y( [5 b- x! N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 F8 `" p/ @8 _) h1 K% T1 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 C2 X1 e7 o6 w. Z4 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' |. ~, s+ Q! j% j1 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ m+ R( w2 x  P" }& K) M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; [5 r* O4 e5 Q) `  y/ v3 J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# e6 P7 B2 l/ M5 B- R4 X" E' a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>